FFfAW Challenge #201: Punishment

Photo provided by H.R.R Gorman. Thanks a lot!

“Yes, ma… Don’t worry, I’ll keep the house under control… Okay, love you too… Alright, bye.” I hung up.

I looked at my brother, who already had his phone in his hand.

“Dante, what are you doing? Ma told us no parties!”

“I’m calling over some friends. Don’t worry about it.” Dante smirked.

“Dante, stop. Last time Ma took away my laptop and your PS4. I don’t want that to happen again.”

“Chill, chill,” Dante said. “We’re gonna play some games. Riley’s coming down, too.”

“Riley is?” Dante knew I had a huge crush on Riley. This was his setup.

“Well, okay, but they have to leave before 10.” I said.

“Sweet. They’re on the way. You call for some pizza, I’ll get the games out.”


I woke up to sun rays coming through the blinds.

“Dante! Dante, get up! We fell asleep and we still haven’t cleaned!” I panicked.

“Chill, chill,” Dante said, stretched out on the couch.

He jerked up when we heard a motor outside.

Word Count: 167 words

I’ve been gone for a while! College is really demanding. This is just a really quick, on the job post. Sorry for the sloppiness!

This was written for the Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers Challenge #201. 

Share your stories and read other stories here.

7 thoughts on “FFfAW Challenge #201: Punishment

      1. Yes, I imagine there are a lot of teenagers like that! LOL! I just found out today that InLinkz is doubling the price of their membership and I am not going to pay that. There won’t be anymore FFfAW challenges. I have enjoyed having you participate in the challenge and getting to know you!

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